T;SLUM HAVE A NEGATIVE EFFECT ON POPULATIONS BECAUSE THE PEOPLE WHO LIVE IN SLUM HAVE POOR LIVING CONDITIONS,DIRTY WATER,AND LIKELY TO GET DISEASES.
A;hook if we are to have free will, that free should includes live life.
B;its what destroys families houses and live long.
C;that we have to help and pray god for those people that have to pass through all that dont have houses to sleep and dont have food to eat.
D;yea so like we have to help doest peolpe alot so they can inyoui llife and to see that life is beautiful and that not because that is happening to them it means that world is over .
11 DEFENDABLE POINT #1
A; main idea; that slum its realy bad for all peolpe.
B;like helping dying people to archive theire last wish of waiting for good to do his part.
C;that means that they cut not finish slum, no one cant stop the slum.
D;so like slum is like realy bad for every one not only for the people that are passing trough that but also to us because its happening in earth.
11 DEFENDABLE POINT #2
A;what do you thing about slum??
B;slum dont go were peolpe are it just get there and destroy people family.
i; QUOTE; According to the United Nations, the percentage of urban dwellers living in slums decreased from 47 percent to 37 percent in the developing world between 1990 and 2005.[
11;PARAPHRASE; SO LIKE IS TELLING US THAT THE SLUM HAVE DECREASED IN DOEST YEAR THAT THEY TELLING US.
C;The explanation is that how maybe slum it not that bad.
D; so like yea maybe slum it not really bad and we just saying bad things about slum.
111;DEFENDABLE POINT#3
A;So that slum have increas or decrease in the pass years
B; According to a 2006 UN-HABITAT report, 327 million people live in slums in Commonwealth countries - almost one in six Commonwealth citizens. In a quarter of Commonwealth countries (11 African, 2 Asian and 1 Pacific), more than two out of three urban dwellers live in slums and many of these countries are urbanising rapidly.
11;paraphrase;is telling us that they were alot of people that have to pass trough slum and everything like that.
so we can see how alot of people pass trough slum and i beat you that this people thing that the world is end because like they are not living there life right.
CONCLUSION
A;SO AS YOU CANT SEE I CAIND OF KNOW WHAT IS SLUM ABOUT AND ITS NOT GOOD.
B;THAT ALL WHAT THEY HAVE IS A DEASISES AND EVERYTHING
C; THEY HAVE TO KEEP GOING AND NEVER GIVE UP AND CONTINUE GOING THAT LIFE IS NOT OVE AN THEY HAVE TO NEVER GIVE UP AND ARCHIVE THERE GOALS.
D;SO NOW WHAT IS YOUR OPINION ABOUT SLUM??
MISS.JAEGER ITS THIS OKKAY ????
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