Tuesday, November 8, 2011

final draft

slum


 Slum have a negative effect on population because the people who live in slum have poor living conditions, dirty water, and likely to get diseases.
                If were are to have free will that free should includes live life. People that have to pass trough slum, the only thing that slum do is destroy families and houses. And sadly the onl thing that we can do for dose people is to pray god for all the people passing trough slum cuz it like nothing easy to pass trought. So yea we have to help well we don’t really have to help dose people but that will be the best thing to do for those people. We need to show them that life is beautifull and like never give up for nothing and to be really strong and dose are the people we have to look up you know they don’t give up for nothing and enjoy every second.
            Slum is a really bad for people , like helping dying people to archive their last wish of waithing for god to do his part. That means that they can stop the slum is something that is just happen we don’t have control over that,if not we had a ready stop it you know like why let it to happened more if me know how people feel about it. So like slum is like really bad for every one not only for the people that are passing through that  but also us because is happening HERE in earth, and one way or other is still affecting us or is going to affect us.
            Slum……mmm slum is like something out of control that just happen because it want to happen, it just get there and star to destroy houses and more importance the families. Slum don’t look at poor people only or to reach people or if they have kids or not and that is what is more bad you know that is what put me sad cuz of that the kids that have to pass through slum. A lot of people had try things to stop the slum but is nothing that we can do is like a tornado or a hurricane you will never stop one of them of passing and destroying people as slum do the same.
            According to the people in charge or the slum thing QUOTE” according to the percentage, of uban dweller living in slum decrease from 47 percent to 37 percent in the developing world between 1990 and 2005.” That means that slum have decreased and that is good we have less people passing through and less people dying because of slum. That means are population is going to increase in a very fast time, by the end of 2011 we are going to have” 6,852,472,823.” That is a lot of people , and that is another problem to us, people of the job and everything like that.
            Getting in this we can see that slum is nothing  good for people that have pass that or have to pass trough that. So lets help those people by praying god  so he can made the things to change we don’t have control of that god know why he send that to those people and why things happened in earth. I just wich everything change and people not to pass through that you know .


final draft

slum


 Slum have a negative effect on population because the people who live in slum have poor living conditions, dirty water, and likely to get diseases.
                If were are to have free will that free should includes live life. People that have to pass trough slum, the only thing that slum do is destroy families and houses. And sadly the onl thing that we can do for dose people is to pray god for all the people passing trough slum cuz it like nothing easy to pass trought. So yea we have to help well we don’t really have to help dose people but that will be the best thing to do for those people. We need to show them that life is beautifull and like never give up for nothing and to be really strong and dose are the people we have to look up you know they don’t give up for nothing and enjoy every second.
            Slum is a really bad for people , like helping dying people to archive their last wish of waithing for god to do his part. That means that they can stop the slum is something that is just happen we don’t have control over that,if not we had a ready stop it you know like why let it to happened more if me know how people feel about it. So like slum is like really bad for every one not only for the people that are passing through that  but also us because is happening HERE in earth, and one way or other is still affecting us or is going to affect us.
            Slum……mmm slum is like something out of control that just happen because it want to happen, it just get there and star to destroy houses and more importance the families. Slum don’t look at poor people only or to reach people or if they have kids or not and that is what is more bad you know that is what put me sad cuz of that the kids that have to pass through slum. A lot of people had try things to stop the slum but is nothing that we can do is like a tornado or a hurricane you will never stop one of them of passing and destroying people as slum do the same.
            According to the people in charge or the slum thing QUOTE” according to the percentage, of uban dweller living in slum decrease from 47 percent to 37 percent in the developing world between 1990 and 2005.” That means that slum have decreased and that is good we have less people passing through and less people dying because of slum. That means are population is going to increase in a very fast time, by the end of 2011 we are going to have” 6,852,472,823.” That is a lot of people , and that is another problem to us, people of the job and everything like that.
            Getting in this we can see that slum is nothing  good for people that have pass that or have to pass trough that. So lets help those people by praying god  so he can made the things to change we don’t have control of that god know why he send that to those people and why things happened in earth. I just wich everything change and people not to pass through that you know .


Wednesday, October 26, 2011

HW

        SLUM HAVE A NEGATIVE EFFECT ON POPULATIONS BECAUSE THE PEOPLE WHO LIVE IN SLUM HAVE POOR LIVING CONDITIONS,DIRTY WATER,AND LIKELY TO GET DISEASES.
AND OF THAT ALOT OF PEOPLE DIE BECAUSE THEY DON'T HAVE ALOT OF FOOD TO EAT AND THEY DON'T HAVE  HEALTHY WATER TO DRING. IF WE ARE TO HAVE FREE WILL, THAT FREE SHOULD  INCLUDES LIVE LIFE. THAT WHAT PEOPLE THAT HAVE TO PASS THROUGH THAT SAY BECAUSE LIKE RIGHT NOW THEY DON'T HAVE A GOOD LIFE SO THEY LIKE THEY WANT TO BE FREE TO LIFE A FREE LIFE AND BE HAPPY AND NO MORE SLUM. BUT THEY KNOW THAT IS IMPOSSIBLE BECAUSE ITS NOT LIKE A CONTROL THAT YOU CAN STOP WENT EVER YOU WHAT  IT IS SOMETHING THAT JUST HAPPEN AND YOU DON'T FOUND A ANSWER FOR THAT. SO WE HAVE TO HELP DOES PEOPLE THAT REALLY NEED ARE HELP BY PRAYING GOOD AND DONATING MONEY SO THEY CANT EAT MORE HEALTHY AND HAVE BETTER HOUSES AND CLOUTING, SO LETS HELP DOES PEOPLE.   

Tuesday, October 25, 2011

THEASIS

T;SLUM HAVE A NEGATIVE EFFECT ON POPULATIONS BECAUSE THE PEOPLE WHO LIVE IN SLUM HAVE POOR LIVING CONDITIONS,DIRTY WATER,AND LIKELY TO GET DISEASES.

INTRODUCTION
A;hook if we are to have free will, that free should includes live life.
B;its what destroys families houses and live long.
C;that we have to help and pray god for those people that have to pass through all that dont have houses to sleep and dont have food to eat.
D;yea so like we have to help doest peolpe alot so they can inyoui llife and to see that life is beautiful and that not because that is happening to them it means that world is over .

11 DEFENDABLE POINT #1
A; main idea; that slum its realy bad for all peolpe.
B;like helping dying people to archive theire last wish of waiting for good to do his part.
C;that means that they cut not finish slum, no one cant stop the slum.
D;so like slum is like realy bad for every one not only for the people that are passing trough that but also to us because its happening in earth.

11 DEFENDABLE POINT #2
A;what do you thing about slum??
B;slum dont go were peolpe are it just get there and destroy people family.
 i; QUOTE; According to the United Nations, the percentage of urban dwellers living in slums decreased from 47 percent to 37 percent in the developing world between 1990 and 2005.[
  11;PARAPHRASE; SO LIKE IS TELLING US THAT THE SLUM HAVE DECREASED IN DOEST YEAR THAT THEY TELLING US.
C;The explanation is that how maybe slum it not that bad.
D;  so like yea maybe slum it not really bad and we just saying bad things about slum.

111;DEFENDABLE POINT#3
A;So that slum have increas or decrease in the pass years 
B; According to a 2006 UN-HABITAT report, 327 million people live in slums in Commonwealth countries - almost one in six Commonwealth citizens. In a quarter of Commonwealth countries (11 African, 2 Asian and 1 Pacific), more than two out of three urban dwellers live in slums and many of these countries are urbanising rapidly.
            
                              1;Quote;According to a 2006 UN-HABITAT report, 327 million of people who pass trough slum
            11;paraphrase;is telling us that they were alot of people that have to pass   trough slum and everything like that. 
so we can see how alot of people pass trough slum and i beat you that this people thing that the world is end because like they are not living there life right.
CONCLUSION
A;SO AS YOU CANT SEE I CAIND OF KNOW WHAT IS SLUM ABOUT AND ITS NOT GOOD.
B;THAT ALL WHAT THEY HAVE IS A DEASISES AND EVERYTHING 
C; THEY HAVE TO KEEP GOING AND NEVER GIVE UP AND CONTINUE GOING THAT LIFE IS NOT OVE AN THEY HAVE TO NEVER GIVE UP AND ARCHIVE THERE GOALS.
D;SO NOW WHAT IS YOUR OPINION ABOUT SLUM??